[Karen P] 雅思写作真题 1008397

The process depicted in the diagram shows the formation of circuit-boards.

The process consists of around nine steps where the beginning is the delivery of the circuit-board material, all the way to the end where the circuit-board is delivered to factories.

To dive deeper into the process, we see at the start of the circuit-board production, that material for the circuit-board is delivered, which is then followed by cutting and spraying the boards with fire retardant. Once the step is complete, it is sent for cleaning, after which it is goes through visual inspection and quality control testing.

After this step, either the circuit board is sent for final testing, or the chips from the rejected boards are thrown away. Moving on towards the end of the fromation cycle, the circuit-boards which are sent for final testing can moving to the packaging stage or they are sent for an automated IC attachment and soldering, which then passes once again through the visual inspection stage and sent back for testing. On the other had the boards which have moved towards the pakaging stage are sent out for delivery to factories.

Boxing is a violent activity which frequently ends in accidents which are physical. This activity is unfavourable to occur during the present-day, and I fully agree with this trend.

In my opinion, boxing as a sport causes numerous physical injuries. This is because, when players face off in the ring, they have minimum protection from the blows aimed at one another. As a result, the players often have broken jaws or swollen eyes after a game. In addition to this, participents of this violent activity face tremendous mental disorientation. Because, once a player gets hit in the ear or the head, the equilibrium of the player fluctuates, thereby causing the player to fall unconsious during the game. So, a constant attack on the equilibrium of a player could result in long term comas or could be endanger them.

Furthermore, people who box have usually have a short term career. This results beause, players start at a young age as they are full on strength and life, but when age starts catching up to them, their strength starts decipating. Hence, their boxing carrers end by thier prime years and the payers take up coaching instead. Subsequently, the well-being of the individual is compromised. When participents take up the sport, a large chunk of their time goes in training. Thus, their social life with family and friends reduces drastically.

Others however, feel that boxing is good for several reasons. Firstly, the players are entitled to much higher salaries as compared to other sports. This is because of the time span one can play this sport. Therfore most players make millions by the time they enter into thier thirties. Moreover, players enjoy the fame and recognition they achive once they win tournaments. They are thrilled when fans chant out thier names from the crowd. Thus they feel they made a name for themselves.

Thus, although there are certain good and bad aspects of boxing, yet owning to the numerous resons it has, I completely agree with this trend.