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[tejasvi b] Writing Practice Test 541676

Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

Writing Task 1

The line graph showcases the proportion of population in the 65 years and above range in the countries of USA,Sweden,Japan from the year 1940 to 2040.

In overview the percentage was between ten and five percent in the beggining then grew upon to twenty five percent in the end.

The trajectory of Usa and Sweden was quite similar both of them followed similarly till the 2000 then there was decoupling and Swedens took over quite considerably for some time then the gap narrowed back in the later half of the century.

Japans on the other hand was different it showed considerable decline till 2000 then shot up exponentially and ended up at highest over the two at 27 percent

Task 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Some people think that the most important thing about being rich is it gives a person the opportunity to help other people.

Do you agree or disagree?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

The society has always appreciated caring and empathy and the people at the top of the wealth pyramid have the resources necessary to make a change in the society .In the esssay we will be discussing about it.

The responsibility to help the people less fortunate is debated time and time again with the two options being governments or wealthy people and though fortunate people are not obligated but it is quite important that they work for the betterment of the community or a whole .this can be done many ways and not just through subsidies.Giving education to people can helpful escape poverty so that they can be productive members of the society and their potential can be reached. Governments however powerful find it quite hard to reach everywhere.

Helping the peple less fortunate helps the society as performance indicators of a society such as hunger index ,crime index can be changes .There are many personalities known to giving back to the less fortunate such as Tata's through their charitable foundation and have helped make change for the better.Helping someone with their medical expenses and gifting them a second shot at life is also noble. People at the bottom of the pyramid also work the hardest and have the least financial security and are the most vulnerable in any economic uncertainity.

In conclusion taking the responsibility of people at the bottom of the wealth pyramid is a noble work that should be highlighted and under taked by the well off to help society as a whole.

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