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[oOxTz6GO_qwMkpvPPQ9n4mORv06Y] Writing Practice Test 451465

Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

Writing Task 1

This chart graph illustrates how many persents of people aged up to 65 in USA,Sweden and Japan from 1940 to 2040.

There were about 7% and 9% people aged 65 and over in Sweden and USA respectively in 1940.These data rose by 2 persents till 1960 then there was a big increment in 1980,making up 15% and 13% respectively.In 2000,the proportion of both Japan and USA reached to about 14% with a slight decrement.From 2000 to 2020,that figure in USA remained at the same level while that of Sweden rose to 20% then drpped by 2%.In the next 20 years,the percentage will increase to 25% and 23% in Sweden and USA.

However,in terms of Japan, the data started by 5% and there was a fluctuation but the figure did not move till 2000.After that,data rose to 10% slightly in 2030.People predict that the proportion will finally reach the peak at 27% in 2040.

All in all,the data shows that there will be more elder people in USA,Sweden and Japan.

Task 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Some people think that the most important thing about being rich is it gives a person the opportunity to help other people.

Do you agree or disagree?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

It is ture that someone think that being rich can give people a chance to help other people in the society is important.I agree with this idea in some extent.

Being rich means people have more chances and responsibility to give others help.For example,people who are rich can hold a charity to domate their money for poor people.Also,there are many people who need help in the world and helping them is each person's responsibility because human are the one.On the other hand , when people help others, they can also receive a sence of grateful and warm.There is a sayingthat gives roses and leaves fragrance.That teaches people that they should remember to help each other forever because this way can give both of them happiness and grateness.I agree with this opion because bigger ability,bigger responsibility.Helping others means helping people themselves in some extent.People who living in the world always need to be helped.If you help a person,maybe he will help you when you need help in the future.

However,some people think that aloughth a person is rich ,it is not the reason for them to help others.All the people is equal in the world and helping others is not the obligation of rich person.The most thing for rich people is to enjoy their own life and take care of their family rather than

helping others.Helping is a volunteer thing,people can choose to help others or not.People in need have no reason to impose the rich person to

help them.

All in all,I agree with that it is an essential thing to help others for rich people while some people disagree with this idea.

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