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[Onur A] Writing Practice Test 671550

Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The chart below shows the results of a survey of people who visited four types of tourist attraction in Britain in 1999.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

Writing task 1

The pie chart and table gives us an information about the various places that are visited by the tourists in Britain in the year of 1999. It can be be observed that tourists showed interested in four major attractions.

Overall, the tourists are visited the theme parks the most, and their favourite place is Blackpool Pleasure Beach with a significant margin.

Taking a closer look at the pie chart, it can be seen that theme parks and museums & galleries are the two major attractions for the visitors. 38% of the tourists prefered to visit the theme parks which makes it the highest attraction in Britain. The second on the chart is museums and galleries with 37% and it is followed by historic houses and monuments with 16%. The last place on the chart is wildlife parks and zoos which is only 9% of the visitors are traveled in 1999.

Meanwhile, the theme parks are the favourite place for the tourists, one place is attracted nearly half of these visitors. 47% of the theme park visitors went to Blackpool Pleasure Beach which is the highest percentage. Next is Alton Towers with 17% and Pleasureland in Southport comes third with 16%. The same percentage of theme parks visitors traveled to Chessington World of Adventures and Legoland in Windsor which is 10%.

Task 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic.

Information technology is changing many aspects of our lives and now dominates our home, leisure and work activities.

To what extent do the benefits of information technology outweigh the disadvantages?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

Writing task 2

The amount of space that information technology covers in our life is getting bigger everyday. We use techonology products at hour houses, work place, and even in our free times. They help us to connect with the people around the world and collect information in a high speed. On the other hand, it would makes us lazy if rely on them too much. In this essay, I will explain how we can benefit from information techonology so we can outweigh its drawback.

Humans are social creatures and technology is helping us to socialize with others world-wide. Computers and the internet are the two products of technology that we use to connect with our friends, families and people. Despite where we live in, in today's world, we are able to talk with our friends almost anytime we want it. As a person who lives abroad, this advantage of technology makes my life a lot easier and helps me to feel less homesick.

Furthermore, with the improvements in technology, we are able to find the information that we looking for online and this would take possibly less than a minute. Search engines such as Google and Yahoo, is very helpful in this case. We can search the information in these platforms rather than going to public libraries, and they would provide in a short period. This speed can help us to improve and gain more information.

However, we can find ourselves at our offices or homes, sitting in front our laptop all day and completing our tasks with a little effort. This habit would makes us lazy and inactive people. Our metabolism needs certain amount of excersise in order to burn calories and not gain fat. Addiction to technology, would take this need away and might cause an harmful health conditions in the future.

To conclude, technology addiction can promote the unhealthy life. However, I believe advantages such as speed of gaining information and providing a platform to connect people, eleminates its drawback.

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