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[Natchapol M] Writing Practice Test 598940

Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The table below shows the sales at a small restaurant in a downtown business district.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

Writing task 1

The given table graph illustrate the amount of sales from a small restaurant in downtown business district throughout the week of october 7th to 13th.

it is immediately apparent that dinner time is way more profitable for the small restaurant than it is in lunch time, peeking at 4,350 pounds in Friday, while the least amount of money earned within the week is still at a respective 2,450 pounds in Sunday. Furthermore, throughout monday to thursday the restaurant profits doesn't go anywhere lower than 3,500 pounds.

On the other hand, lunchtime will only reach its highest profits in Wednesday, hitting at only 2,595 pounds, which is a 1,200 pounds shy comparing to Wednesday in dinner time and by sunday the restaurant will hit its lowest points at 1,550 pounds. while, monday to thursday may show a decent amount of profit being made but it still can't compete with their profits during dinner time.

From an overall observation, Dinner time for this small restaurant is far more profitable comparing to their time during lunch.

Task 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Some people think that it is important to use leisure time for activities that improve the mind, such as reading and doing word puzzles.

Other people feel that it is important to rest the mind during leisure time.

Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

You should write at least 250 words.

Writing task 2

Some people seem to think that leisure time should be the time for people to do something productive and others argue that it should be the time to rest your mind, while I think that our free time should not be wasted, but if we are overworking ourselves, it can caused us our mental health, So getting some break from all the work could really help, but it really depends what kind of person you are.

As someone who have worked a lot in the past, I can definitely say that overworking can really do you a lot of benefits. while it might seem unhealthy because it will cost you a lot of energy and drain you for most of your happiness, it will however give you a huge progress in your work by taking over most of your free time and replacing it with work schedules. An great example of this, is a billionaire named Elon Musk who have basically slept inside his factory several times to offer help and motivate his workers in the morning, overworking himself even when he is already wealthy.

On the other hand, if you do not have the mental capacity to endure the overwhelming pressure of overworking. It will absolutely make you implode mentally and physically. While a mental breakdown is not a sight to behold, maybe we should use our free time to decompress and enjoy our time with people we care about and make time for activities that we enjoy doing.

In my opinion, eventhough I like the idea of taking a break from our work but in the real world, there is no time for breaks. In the real world, people will push you to the very edge and they will continue to push you untill you fall. However, if you believe that you are capable of enduring the pressure of overworking yourself, then I believe that you will have a brighter future than others.

All in all, people should not overwork if they can not handle the amount of stress that comes with it and they should find the time to let go and stay in touch with themselves, by doing things that doesn't relate to their stressful work.

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