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[AELYN A] Writing Practice Test 567810

Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The diagram below shows the development of cutting tools in the Stone Age. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

Writing task 1

The map presents the landscape of Chorleywood village near London, and its infrastructure from 1808 until 1994.

Overall, a massive change has been developed since the early years in Chorleywood village, wherein you can observe the expansion of the different establishments, like the railway and the new motorway have built.

In 1808, the main road is the only foundation that we can see in the village, also one can observe the Chorleywood Park and Golf course has been established in the north part of the neighborhood. In addition, from 1883 until 1994, a steady increase in the population has been developing in different locations of the town, also during 1970, the construction of the Motorway has been made on the other side of the main road.

Besides the increasing population of the town, another important structure has been built in 1909, which was the Railway across the main road. While the people establish different locations for the houses, the park, and golf course remain its position, surrounded by the villagers.

Task 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic.

Nowadays, sports is a big business with high earnings for professional sports people and companies involved both financially and other ways. Is this a positive or negative development for sports?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

Those people believe that smoking is the same as antisocial as the use of a mobile phone, and think that it should be banned in some areas. However, I strongly disagree with this view.

The use of mobile phone has its own advantage and disadvantages just like smoking, although the latter has a great effect on one's health it is not as much as using a mobile phone. Basically, one of the huge advantages of using a cellular phone is a new means of communication, whereas video calls or chatting can be done. Also, it can be useful in studying especially during online classes if laptops are not available. Other good aspects of being knowledgeable on using a phone, in terms of work, it can be used as a daily calendar for meetings and other important events that help you look at the internet on your phone.

However, excessive usage of mobile phones can be a significant disadvantage for individuals, just like smoking. For instance, driving while texting or making a call, can result in road accidents that may involve other innocent people. Using cellular phones during office hours causes a delay in the daily routine of an employee because the task should be done instead, you stack on playing or scrolling on your phone. Imprudent gaming on the phone can result in various health issues like arthritis of the finger, and stiff neck.

To conclude, the use of mobile phones has its own benefits for every person, they just need to control their manner of usage, just like a habit of smoking. If there is a proper guide or handling of mobile it has wide relevant use in our everyday life.

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