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[Leonardo G Otto] Writing Practice Test 565224

Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The diagram below shows the development of cutting tools in the Stone Age. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

Writing task 1

Chorleywood have been a small village bear London since 19th century. But at the middle at this century the population had been increase rapidly. This transformation occour because of use of new roads and transportation ways like railway or motorways.

Today we can split the city in six areas crossed by different roads and railways.

The first population grow was arround the area of the main road from 1868 until 1922.

After it the creation of railway crossing the main road in 1909 made the area around the station grow alot until 1922. And after it from 1922 until 1970 the area a round the railway grows a lot.

Other big population increase happend after the MotorWay creation in 1970 at the East of the main road.

At the more recent year, 1970 until 1994 just the areas between main road and motorway had been grow more in population probably because of the increase number of car usage.

Task 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic.

Nowadays, sports is a big business with high earnings for professional sports people and companies involved both financially and other ways. Is this a positive or negative development for sports?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

The use of smartphone can be sometimes very antisocial. It could break the flow of the conversation and stops some biological signals between people, like eyes contact or other intercations. This use of mobile phones could be compared of the smoking habit, because both are kid of addictions today.

Some people advocate to apply some rules to ban the mobile phones as same banned smoking areas.

We need to take care of this kind of mindset, if you make a shallow comparison this seams as a efficient resolution for the antisocial behaviours, but phones are not the same as smoking and when you need to compare thinks you should think deeply at it.

First phones are tools, and not direct related as smoking addiction.

Phones today are ours central point of comunication to the world. An ban it could couse problems in some dangerous situtions or just make people forget or dont be alert when something need fast action.

Phones have been used today to replace some documents or make payments, then is other option to dont need to carry all other documents or things.

Antisocial behaviour will happend with phone or other things if people aren't interested to the up topic. Then ban it will not resolve the antisocial behaviour.

I strong disagree with the idea of ban a tool useful in a lot of cases, including security, just because people can't create interesting topics to lub their social interaction.

The problem isn't the tool, the problem is the human behaviour. And change this is more complex that you think.

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