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[Bar S] Writing Practice Test 559843

Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The charts below compare the age structure of the populations of France and India in 1984.

Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

Writing task 1

This chart provides information about the age structure of the populations between France and India in 1984.

Overall, we can see that in India the percentage of males and females are even in all ages. On the other hand, in France the age percentage is a little bit different.

In India, the highest number of females and males is people around 0-15 with 7 percent. The percentage of men and women decreases as people get older and the percentage is almost 0.

In France, there are some differences. Between the ages 65-85 among males and females, females as the upper hand they have 3 percent and the males as 2 percent. In addition, from the age 0-35 the percentage stays the same, with 4 percent. However, at the age of 40 the population for both men and women suddenly drop to 3 percent and it's staying like this until the age 65

Task 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic.

Many parents today organise extra classes for their children after school and at the weekends.

Do you feel that this is a worthwhile thing to do or do you feel children have enough education at school?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

Writing task 2

Nowadays, education became one of the important things there is all over the world. Many parents push their children to study hard in order to be someone in life, because of that a lot of parents force extra classes on children besides education in school. I strongly feel that it's not going to help children and the children get enough education at school as it is.

First, school is a place where children spend almost half of their day. Making children to do extra study after school is only going to put more presher on them during the day and even can cause health problems. For example, when I was a student my parents made me study outside of school many hours. This studying made me feel tired and weak almost every day. I really hated that feeling. One day I decided to explain my parents my feeling about the action they took in order to give me a better education, as a result they understood me and stoped the extra classes for me.

Next, I think children should spend most of their time on doing things they want to do. Children are just children they don't have to deal with the real-life yet, they can be free most of the time and don't have to worry about problems like extra classes.

To sum up, parents should think twice before giving kids extra classes because I, think it's not going to benefit for the children it's only going to do worse. Children shouldn't worry about studying, they should spend their time on doing things they want to do instead of thinking about education

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