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[Linh H] Writing Practice Test 348616

Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The pictures show the changes of a park from 1980 to the present day.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

Writing Task 1

The given maps depict the refurbishment of a park between 1980 and the contemporary periods.

In general, the park has been more accessible and experienced the addition of new facilities to serve the public's entertainment demands.

In 1980, there was a single path run through the park, connecting the main entrance in the south and the north side. At the present, a new pedestrian paths system is erected, which has 4 main trails to all sides and divide the park into distinct quarters for appropriate activities. In the centre, all the paths meet each other at the large intersection.

Regarding the northwest sector of the park, this zone used to be a tree plantation in 1980 but then renovated into a modern place for residents to barbecue and picnic. In contrast, the garden in the southwest maintained intact with ponds and benches around; however, the flowers have been replaced with bushes. The opposite area is designed to be a children playground, in particular, for organizing soccer.

Task 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

People often think about creating an ideal society, but most of the times fail in making this happen.

What is your opinion about an ideal society

How can we create an ideal society?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

Nowadays, a majority of people tend to aspire to a perfect community, but their visions are distinct from others. In my viewpoint, I believe that people should incline to live in an opulent and harmonious society; and attain such an objective demands both government and individuals' effort.

From my perspective, we have to construct a society in which everyone earns a high income to afford a standard life and people live hospitably to each other. That employees are assured that they will receive appropriate payment for their labouring. Hence, they are liberated from financial problems, which might attribute to serious apprehension. In other words, they can achieve an affluent lifestyle, appreciating higher contentment and well-being. In addition, since mental health problems are caused when people encounter social segregation; we need to maintain a harmonious community with positive relationships. That is to say, politeness, respectation and justice are indispensable characteristics when people communicating with each other.

In order to accomplish those ambitions, the government should implement policies to escalate income level and individuals need to cooperate with their counterparts. On the one hand, the authority has to increase the minimal level of emolument to guarantee that even labours with modest salaries can manage standard lives. On the other hand, the harmonious correlation between residents is essential in building a perfect society. In particular, we should interact equally with everyone to avoid any prejudice and racism that can damage their esteem and mind. Therefore, government and residents' work is obligatory in constructing our aimed community.

In conclusion, I concur that substantial emolument and harmony are necessary aspects to acquire in an excellent society. As a result, the authority has to raise the minimum salary and citizens have to maintain harmony with others in order to generate an inclined community for us.

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