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[Thera G] Writing Practice Test 260787

Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The pictures show the changes of a park from 1980 to the present day.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

Writing Task 1

The map illustrates the 1980 and the present day modification of a park. Overall, the park before had only one pathway and zero outdoor activities. Today, there is footpath in either side and more leisure activities present.

To begin, in 1980 the entrance to the park was fenced and was located at the south-east side. Moreover, four benches with a pond at the center was located on the right side, particularly at the west side of the pathway. Flowers was seen at both side of the entrance. In addition, at the north-east of the park, three trees was planted. Also, no people were seen.

In the present period, more recreational activities are seen. The fence is remove and pathways can be seen on the north, east, west and south side of the park. While on the opposite side people can play football and flowers at the left side is replaced by a shrub. The pond is still on the same position. However, the 4 benches are reduce to three. At the upper corner, outside hobby like picnics and barbeques are spotted.

Task 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

People often think about creating an ideal society, but most of the times fail in making this happen.

What is your opinion about an ideal society

How can we create an ideal society?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

One of the ambition of the people is to create a harmonious community to live in. Unfortunately, individuals often fail to create one. This essay will discuss what is an ideal society, as well as ways on how to make it happen.

An ideal community is a place where peace of mind over shadows fear. We all now that everyone wants a place that is criminal free. For example, people can just walk in an aisle without thinking of being raped or kidnapped. Moreover, it is a community in which discrimination, prejudice and racism is prohibited. In short, everyone is treated equally regardless of gender, colors, religions, social status, jobs and looks. It also means that, people can just walk in and out of a hospital or establishments without being looked down or degraded by other people especially those with high status.

However, it is difficult for people to meet this kind of standards. This mainly because nobody is made perfect and as a human being we are mostly dominated by hatred, jealousy and selfishness. Although people fail to have a perfect society, there are some ways on how to have a near perfect place to live. First of all, government should make the lives of the people a better one by being an active role model to the citizens. There should not be corruption involve amongst the higher ups. Also, as what the saying goes "learning should start at home", it means that, parents should the take the initiative to educate their children proper manners in dealing with other people. In Japan, children were taught in a very young age on how to treat other people. That is why they always bow down their head as a sign of respect.

To conclude, creating an essential environment can be challenging and demanding for all of us. Eventhough, it is impossible to make, each one of us can has the capacity to contribute to make society an almost perfect one.

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