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[Marco C] Writing Practice Test 216489

Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The pictures show the changes of a park from 1980 to the present day.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

Writing Task 1

The diagrams respectively demonstrates the floorplans of a park in 1980 and today.

Generally speaking, the park has changed widely from the use of its space, the recounstruction of pedestrian road to the variety of facilities.

In 1980, the park was divided into two parts by a path from the the southern park to the northwest of the park that the left of the park is a pond with several seats and the right-hand side is a little forest.

Nowadays, the garden are separated by a cross-shaped pedestrian road into 4 parts locating in the four corner areas. The pond relocated in the lower-left corner in the park with fewer seats and meanwhile, the little area of tree is still in the right along with some barbecue facilities. Additionally, a new football playground is erected into the southeast of the park. In the upper-left corner, there is an empty area with only grass.

Task 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

People often think about creating an ideal society, but most of the times fail in making this happen.

What is your opinion about an ideal society

How can we create an ideal society?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

Sociologists and politicans always believe human beings cannot live alone, so it is the reason of why we develop our society. However, no matter how hard people try to build a desirable society, this hope just nearly impossible to be realized. Everyone may have their own thought towards an ideal society. In my opinion, an ideal society should have no coflict with two pilars called trust and empathy.

While some people think that one indicator of how ideal a region is should be the national wealth or its GDP, I think trust among people should be valued more. In recent years, a study revealed that 99% wealth of the world was owned by the 1% people in the world and the fact has strengthened the confrontation between the rich and the poor because people think that the rich isn't trustworthy that they just oppress the grass-root and take their money by breaking their promises. This example shows that economy does not equal to how great a society is, but trust can be. If people have confidence of the others' behavior, the society could has less confict. Having a look at the factor of trust, we may ask how empathy can help to construct an ideal society.

It seems that a community is always full of conficts and misunderstanding, but empathy may shed the light on how to get away from those unpleasant things. By psychological research, a person with higher level of empathy always has lower possibility of a combat or argument with others as they can always wear the caps of the others to think. Consequently, they can understand and accept the ideas or thoughts easier. With more people being considerate and generous, our living place can develop a new culture which encourages us to avoid confronting with others and to facilitate everyone to understand each other more .

To conclude, I want to live in a society with no conflict among people. For accomplish this dream, sharing trust and to be empathetic are critical to everyone. Living peacefully can pave the way for people having more time to focus on their habits, interests and personal growth, eventual leading our socicety to be more multidimensional with love, understanding and trust.

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