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[Lakindu V] Writing Practice Test 163128

Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The pictures show the changes of a park from 1980 to the present day.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

Writing Task 1

These two maps depict the settlement of a park in 1980 and nowadays. At first glance, it is clear that the park develops as a modern park. Nowadays shows more infrastructure and a modern park system.

In 1980, the park had one main footpath, running south to northwest, respectively. However, nowadays, there are four footpaths running from middle of the park and spread around the four sides of the park.

In 1980, the park had one main gate with flower plants, respectively. Even so, nowadays there is no main gate.

Furthermore, in 1980, west side of the park shows four benches and a pond but nowadays shows only 3 benches.

Moreover, in 1980 northeast and south-east side of the park had 3 trees and an empty garden but nowadays the park has children's play area and people's eating area.

In summary, the development of the park is clearly observed in the expansion of four footpaths, and children play area, as well as people's eating area.

Task 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

People often think about creating an ideal society, but most of the times fail in making this happen.

What is your opinion about an ideal society

How can we create an ideal society?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

In some countries educated people usually think about creating an ideal society. In this essay will assess several reasons for this problem, as well as solutions to tackle it. The causes of people think about creating an ideal society have a wide range of reasons.

The main reason is some people in some societies do not have a good education system, as well as no good family background. This is the way to mitigate this problem. As an example, think there is a boy who does not have parents and living in a street. consequently, that boy easily commits to using drugs and illegal products. If government can help to reduce this problem, can easily create an ideal society. Secondly, government should ban action movies and 18 plus adults movies. As an example, think there is a boy always watching action movies, consequently, will have a bad knowledge of society and use to fight with people.

School teachers, media channels, and government agents can help to reduce this problem, as well as teachers can instruct their children about the good and bad side of the society, consequently, sort out this problem. Parents always want to do keep on eye with their children. This means anyone who under 18 years old. Those who have a good knowledge of society usually agree with the parents doing this.

Thus, with the above in mind, I believed one single man can not change the society. Government, Schools, parents, teachers, agents, educated people should have to help to the society, consequently, can build an ideal society.

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