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[Kate R] Writing Practice Test 161992

Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The pictures show the changes of a park from 1980 to the present day.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

Writing Task 1

The pictures illustrate the development of a park that has taken place from 1980 to nowadays.

Overall, it is clear that now this park has a significant transformation in comparison with 1980, the infrastructure is observed to be improved, while the green zones and trees are reduced.

From the pictures it can be inferred that only one zone with benches and water remain almost the same (only one bench is removed) without changing location.

As for changings it is noticeable that in 1980 it was just only one way which you can choose going through this park, while in our time the path is expanded into four ways. The forest which is observed in 1980 now is splitted into 2 separate places: barbeque zone where people can chill. cook and spend a good time with friends and a football field. Futhermore, there was a gate at the entrabce to the park in 1980 and now the park is open.

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Task 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

People often think about creating an ideal society, but most of the times fail in making this happen.

What is your opinion about an ideal society

How can we create an ideal society?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

There is an opinion to create a perfect society, but very often people face failures to create it. This essay will contain information about my personal opinion to this topic and possible ways how to create it.

In my opinion, it is a controversial question about creating an ideal society. An ideal society for me is a world where there is no crimes, homeless people, spoiled air, where all people live in piece. From my point of view, even if we talk just only about ideal society in one country it is very difficult to promote right thoughts and explain how every person should live. We will always face the situation when some people accept it and others reject. In this case there always will be disputes and conflicts. For instance, if the government wants to keep nature and forbid some factories to exist and don't offer other vacant positions to employees, a lot of people become unemployed and some of them might start robbering in order to survive and feed their families.

Discussing the ways how to create an ideal society, it is logical for everyone not to wait for someone who will ask to do it. It is important to start from ourselves, to create a list of values which we follow and which we want to accept. For example, if people want to take care about nature, they should go outside and grow a tree in front of their houses, if men want to live in a positive atmosphere , they should start sharing positive vibes with families, friends and even strangers, giving them a smile.

In conclusion, i want to highlight one more time that the meaning of ideal society is very complex and not common, that is why it is very difficult to create it. Nothing is ideal in our lives and especially in the whole society. The only thing people can do to achieve this goal is to start from themselves.

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