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[Saly L] Writing Practice Test 125388

Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The pictures show the changes of a park from 1980 to the present day.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

Writing Task 1

The graphs displays current modifications which were made in a park built in 1980. Such changes did not reduced the space of it, but was divided into several areas in order to people can take advantage of all its benefits.

First of all, when park was built, it only had some benches where people can seat after a good walk. Additionally, trees and small flowers were part of the park with some defined areas.

However, some changes were made in the park and now it has great recreational and picnic areas. Picnic area, for example, offers 2 big tables and one grill to people who enjoy of barbecues. In addition, there are some trees around this area.

On the other hand, in recreational area, people can play football without bother those who only want to walk or relax in other sectors of the park.

In summary, modification performed in park provides to people excellent areas where they can play sports, cook, and have a good time in family.

Task 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

People often think about creating an ideal society, but most of the times fail in making this happen.

What is your opinion about an ideal society

How can we create an ideal society?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

For many years, people have wanted to live in a society without crisis and concerns. However, this situation does not often occur and some of them believe that achieve this is relatively impossible. This essay will discuss a personal point of view about an ideal society as well as how people could establish one.

In my belief, an exemplar society is a utopia due to each person pursues different goals in life. Generally, people always look for their own well-being and hardly think about the others. Although, there are groups which try to look for equality no matter sex, age, and social status individuals are, there are a high percentage of people who believe that meritocracy is the fairest way to fight for and to deserve something. Unfortunately, because of such big contrasts in opinions and interests, would be extremely hard to create an ideal society.

However, there are some factors which would help to perform a model society. For instance, education and health care should be settled by governments. It means that a great amount of the state budget must be allocated in such areas. Doing so, more people would be well educated and their work opportunities would increase considerably. Furthermore, by creating more job sources, more people would have the opportunity to reach a more comfortable life and, as a result, an equal and an ideal society.

To sum up, in my view an exemplar society is a challenging goal, in other words, an impossible target to reach because of the different interests that people have. If changes are made, only few people could feel comfortable with it while the others would still fight for new developments. Nevertheless, important actions, such as strategic support to crucial sectors can be undertaken to create a better society.

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