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[joyce o] Writing Practice Test 115188

Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The pictures show the changes of a park from 1980 to the present day.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

Writing Task 1

The diagram given illustrates comparison of a given park between 1980 and today .

Overall, the park was initially divided into two parts divided by a path . while, today the park has four sections.

In 1980 the park had the east and south eastern part occupied with chairs . while in today 's picture the place has been reduced to a small portion which covers only the south .Initially the path run through the park from the south to the north east having only two entrances . But ,in the present diagram the park has four entrances .

In the beginning, the park had trees to the north west which has been replaced with an open place for family resting.The south west was occupied with flowers in 1980. Today its a play ground area for kids .and .Before the park was surrounded by a thick wall which covered the whole park .while presently the wall is thin.

Task 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

People often think about creating an ideal society, but most of the times fail in making this happen.

What is your opinion about an ideal society

How can we create an ideal society?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

Some individuals have thoughts of making a perfect community. Although they have never been successive .A perfect community has people with the same customs ,cultures and law .

In my opinion ,i believe an ideal society is a community with people living many aspects .First and foremost perfect society must have peace .this is where people learn to stay with harmony no conflict and quarreling .For example , people living in a given plot should not fight over un necessary things like fetching water and hangers .secondly a society should have good security .this will help to minimize cases like robbery ,crimes and murder .Given example, a place like Kibera in Nairobi where people are murdered and bodies thrown away .people live with fear not knowing what will happen next .Therefore , making it difficult to achieve the ideal society.

In order ,to create ideal society one has to consider some positive measure .Firstly , people living together must create good relationship among each other . This can be achieved by having community project .For example Linda mama women project in Kenya which promotes group meeting for women in society and promotes unity . Secondly, enforcement of certain law in a given to punish criminals .For example people who steal should be punished thoroughly by the area chief . This will create peace and harmony. Hence , making it difficult to achieve ideal society .

In conclusion some individuals have thoughts of making a perfect community. Although they have never been successive.

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