[fazal h] Writing Practice Test 1016522

the Bar graphs illustrates the number of people in percentages living in cities, towns and rural areas born in australia and born outside australia in 1995 and 2010.

the chart shows that number of people living in cities born in australia and ouside australia has increased from 1995 to 2010, while the number of people living in towns and rural areas has declined in the same period.

with more detail, 50 percent people were liiving in cities , born in australia in 1995 and it has reached 65 percent in 2010 with an increase of 15 Percent . similarly 60 percent people were living in cities, born outside australia in 1995 and now 80 % people are living in cities in 2010 with an increase of 20 percent in these 15 years.

while on the other hand people born in australia living in towns has declined from 20 percent in 1995 t0 15 Percent in 2010 and those living in rural areas from 30 percent to 15% in the same years. similarly the number of people living in towns and rural areas born out side australia has significantly decresed in these 15 years.

People go to the markets and buy different products wraped in a lot of nondegradable packaging materials , leading to environmental polllution. in order to redue the quantity of packing materials, some portion of the society considers, that it is only the responsibility of goods manufacturing companies and sellers to reduce the amount of nondegradable packing materials, while other segment argue that clients should avoid and discourage purchase of goods with too much packaging.in my opinion it is unfair to blame solely the goods manufacturers and sellers but rather, it is the responsibility of the two stackholders to reduce the amount of nondegradable packaging. here in this essay i will discuss both views and will give reasons in support of my opinion with relevant examples.

there are two types of products, sensitive/breakable and resistant /non breakable . as for as sensitive products are concerned , they are wraped in a lot of packaging materaial to make sure its safety during transportation. here in this case , the companies and sellers have no second option to reduce the amount of packaging. while on the other hand , with non breakable products , there are no chances of any sort of risk during its transportation. so the manufacturers should dont use or use minimum amount of packaging. moreover there is an alternate option too, companies can use degradable paper as packing material. for example ,many countries have baned the use of polythene shoppers and they are using paper made shopping bags .

similarly , the customers can also play their role to reduce the use of nondegradable pacakaging . the clients should manufacture cotton or cloth made shopping bags, which are degradable, wasahable and environment friendly too. whenever they go to market, they should pack their grocerries in these cotton made bags .

hence in my opinion, both the manufacturers, sellers and customers can play their role to reduce the aamount of packing.