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[Hyeon J Park] Writing Practice Test 598100

Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

Writing task 1

The line graph illustrates the amount about enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over 9 years from 2001 to 2010. They separate students by two parts, which are commencing students and total students.

Overall, the overseas students increasing each year, both commencing and total number of students with big gap. The number of commencing students is increasing every year, so of course the total number of overseas students are increasing too. However, since 2009, the number of overseas students(both of commencing and total) has decreased noticeably, but unlike local students, it has not decreased than before.

On the other hand, while the overseas students is steadily increasing, the local students did not increase or rather decreased both commencing and total students. At the middle of the 9 years, from 2002 to 2006, local commencing students get reduce, but they increased again for 2 years until 2008. Local students are not continue to rise as overseas students but showing little change as reduced and a little bit of increasing.

Task 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

In these days, many country hosting an international sports event such as Olympics, FIFA and Rugby World Cup and some people are go crazy about that, but some people this it is bad. In my opinion, I think hosting and international sports event is good for the country but it also have disadvantage.

Firstly, the benefit of hosting an international sports event is we could secure inflows of foreign capital and this means, it will be helpful in terms of economy. For example, there will be many foreigners to come to watch the game and they should spend their money in our country. Those foreign people will bring a big local economy to our country.

Another advantage of hosting an international sports event is people who doesn't have a job can get a job during the events week. If country hosting major sports events such as Olympics and World Cup, they will need many people because they have a lot of work so hosting an international sports event is also help to people who doesn't have a job.

However, hosting an international sports event also has disadvantage which is the investment cost is very high, so there will be a lot of money used in the country. It means, people will have to pay higher taxes to pay costs. Also if country postpone the event because they can't do it like Tokyo Olympics last year, countriy will spend more money.

In conclusion, hosting an international sports event is good for the country but they also have a risk in there. But as long as the situation is good, organising major sports event is good for country.

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