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[KIWAN P] Writing Practice Test 525037

Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The diagrams below show the existing ground floor plan of a house and a proposed plan for some building work.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

Writing task 1

The diagrams illustrates the difference of between of previous ground floor plan and proposed plan for a house.

All in all, the scheme has a dramatic change in the layout as some features have been introduced and removed such as a internal wall on the center of the plan has been demolished.

Concerning with the previous one, there were two entrances on the house; one from the north side and the other from south side of the picture. A hall was present on the center of the scheme with the two internal walls on both side of it that portioned the house into three segments of the house which were closely attached to the two internal doors and storage under stairs.

When it comes to proposed one, storage under stairs on the north side of the previous plan was eliminated with only one internal wall left where two internal doors were transferred from north side of the previous scheme.

Notably, while there was a change on kitchen with furnished kitchen furniture on the left side of the scheme, no change has been made on the living room.

Task 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic.

Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child's development while others think that it is important for children to go to school.

Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

Around the world, education issue has always been dealt with through numerous parents and experts.

While some are of the opinion that home schooling are optimum ways of education, some contend that school is the most important factor in children. This essay will explore both arguments, and conclude that school is the better option for education.

On the one hand, there is a prominent reason why people argue that home schooling is more worthwhile option than school. Firstly, parents know their children the best. That is to say, they can flexibly deal with some difficult situations that happened around their offsprings. For instance, if a child are allergic to certain kinds of ingredients such as shrimps while eating, parents can easily exclude that component which is not possible in a school where janitors could not always guide the students around the clock.

Notwithstanding with a reason mentioned above, more merits are underlying on a school. First of all, juveniles can increase social abilities by intimately connecting with their same generations. Specifically, a cooperation skill will be enhanced since students can actively participate on a class. For instance, almost everyone in the class undergo conflicts in a group that result into habit of concessing which was nearly impossible if oneself is isolated from the outside world. Secondly, students can adjust to a environment which is rapidly changing in the significant rate of pace. Precisely, permeating in to a social group means that they can share the changes that is happening around the world. For example, the newest trend of information such as fashion or sports or even university is usually a favorite topic between teenagers which in turn makes students respond to changing world promptly.

In conclusion, despite the fact that a significant merit is generated by home schooling due to private education by parents, I strongly assert that more benefits are present on the school education such as the higher probability of increasing social skills and responding to rapidly changing world.

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