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[Bonita S] Writing Practice Test 513519

Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The diagrams below show the existing ground floor plan of a house and a proposed plan for some building work.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

Writing task 1

As you can see the diagrams of existing floor plan there are small space for stairs and some of usless things that need to be change for a wider space such as where the entrance door, to open for making the the owner of the house feel more comfortable to walk in.

They had remove the hall for saving cost because it not that's necessary and they added kitchen furniture. As i am comparing two picture I prefer living in the second diagram because there are less internal wall so it will not be too tight for me and i feel like every parts of the house is connecting in this floor. Living room are having more space to walk or doing others acitiy it suitable for family with many children. The proposed changes are a great idea to be change for this house.

Task 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic.

Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child's development while others think that it is important for children to go to school.

Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

Writing task 2

In my opinion I think both of the method has difference benefits as this year there are corona virus in Laos, so my little brother had to stop going to school and now he is at home with his parents. Everyday his mom and dad is teaching him at home so I have a chance to see the different between weather he's learning in school or learning at home.

When he was learning in school he had meet new friends and new teachers it was quite fun for him and a good experience to learn with other student. It's help him to get well with society when he's growing up. Teachers in school had give him a full time of teaching and taking care of him.

When he was at home, some time his parents teach him but some time they don't, because his parent is too busy but they had find some free day to take their son to new places to explore such as travelling to others places and zoo. He has learn and remember the name of many animals more quicker beauce he had seen and touch the real one and travelling also help to imporve his mind set and idea.

Best way for teaching the children is to doing both of them, parents should take their child to school, at the same parents needs to teach them also.

Ofcourse parents can teach their child but if children are learning in school they will have a better education.

If we don't send our kids to school so what is the reason why this world has to have school or teacher for.

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