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Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

Your friend is thinking about learning to drive and would like some advice.

Write a letter to your friend. In your letter

•    say why a driving licence is advantageous

•    recommend a driving school

•    give any extra guidance/tips

 

You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Begin your letter as follows:

Dear...,

You should write at least 150 words.

Writing Task 1

Dear Ahmed

I am writing to you to give you some advice for the crucialness to learn driving and having a driving license. In the modern age, driving license is not only advantageous when you apply for jobs, but when you travel abroad too.

I personally, recommend DCA driving school, located in Al-Basha square. Their rates are much cheaper compared to other driving schools, having a diverse instructor who are very friendly and well qualified, and I have learnt driving with them too. Furthermore; their driving lessons involve both automatic and manual transmission cars which is obliging when you purchase your future car and when you will take your test.

I suggest you read the instructions given by the ministry of interior to familiarize yourself with the road rules, available for free on both App store and Google Play store. Moreover; this application offers simulated real test for, so you could prepare for your driving test.

I wish you all the best.

Regards

Amr Mohammed

Task 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

Should long-term job seekers in receipt of government benefits be made to do voluntary work so that they give something back to the community?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

It is crucial that long term job seekers who receive government funds do voluntary work to give back the community. The community consists of different skills list and each one must hand out by different manners, and this encompasses long term job seekers. Most of their funding comes from taxpayers who contribute to the community and the economy. Hence; it will be fair if long term job seekers receiving these benefits shell out to the community as well.

Considering that long term job seekers well find a strenuousness to get back to work and find jobs after retirement. By heartening them to volunteer and offer some work to the community, it will be less arduous for them to adjust when they find a job. In addition; volunteering long term job seekers are demonstrating a commitment to really show that they need work. This might be an encouragement to potential employers and may increase their chances of finding a job.

Moreover; when long- term job seekers are involved in voluntary work, it discourages retaliation from the community in response to government benefits. In other words, it coalesces the community. Regrettably, not everyone will see it from that perspective. Some people may find it as a controlling mechanism by the government and it might have negative thwacks on the government's image.

To conclude, in my opinion I do think long term out of work seekers should do voluntary work. Like the meaning of the word voluntary, they should not be forced but offered an opportunity to volunteer.

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