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Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

Your friend is thinking about learning to drive and would like some advice.

Write a letter to your friend. In your letter

•    say why a driving licence is advantageous

•    recommend a driving school

•    give any extra guidance/tips


You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Begin your letter as follows:


You should write at least 150 words.

Writing Task 1

Dear Sam,

I'm glad to see your letter after a long time, good to know that you've finally decided to take your drivers licence which has been long due.

It goes without saying how important it will be for you to take the licence, because in a city like London it's an absolute necessity specially for you being a sales and marketing professional which requires a lot of work related travel. You dont have to rely upon public transportation for all your travel needs and that a big plus, as you know during rush hours the local bus schedules many time cause delays.

I'd advise you to take your driving classes from the same school as I've been, they offer good discounts and moreover they provide lessons in the evenings, which may suit you well after your working hours.

Don't push yourself too hard to get your licence fast, it's very important for you to pay attention to all the instructions given at your drivoing school and top of that I'm always there for any support.

Give me a call back when you arrive in London,

See you soon,


Task 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

Should long-term job seekers in receipt of government benefits be made to do voluntary work so that they give something back to the community?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

Unemployed people seeking jobs for long duration are generally compensated moneterily from government bodies and I strongly vote for the idea for such group of people to take part in voluntary activities either part time or full time to have a sense of satisfaction by supporting the local community.

Most job seeking individuals feel contempt with the money they receive and not really take the job seeking part seriously, this puts a lot of burden on the government and without doubt these figures are on the rise day by day given the amount of applicants seeking such assistance. It is a common sight in my neighbourhood to see many jobless individuals wandering around and wasting time with no real efforts to find one.

While it goes without saying the importance of helping such people, It is is also important for Government organizations to make it mandatory for such individuals to take up voluntary activities and submit a proof to the local office before they receive any funds. Thus ensuring they are supporting the local area. My friend who lost his job a few months ago has been supporting an old age home until he got a new job and for the time period he was receiving the support, he continues to help the elderly on the weekends and whenever he finds time.

All individuals receiving support should be made to give back to the society and this could happen only when the government makes ammendments to the existing law for job seekers to ensure all are benefitted.

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