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Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

Your friend is thinking about learning to drive and would like some advice.

Write a letter to your friend. In your letter

•    say why a driving licence is advantageous

•    recommend a driving school

•    give any extra guidance/tips

 

You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Begin your letter as follows:

Dear...,

You should write at least 150 words.

Writing Task 1

Dear Mario,

I am so delighted hearing from you that you want to learn to drive. As I know you want to work as sales representative in your brother's company, you will definitelly need obtain a drive licence, because will be demanded to visit his clients. Apart from this, the drive licence will allow you to feel freedom, once you will be able to drive wherever you want to go without be dependent of public transport schedule.

I strongly recommend you learn through the school called First Drive, that is located in Ciatron downtown, because the instructors are tremendously experienced, and patient, they will make you feel more comfortable and fearless while driving. This school open even on sundays as well, this is going to be helpful for you due your busy diary routine.

I want you give an advice, practice as much as you can so that you will feel relaxed at your exam day. Also, do not forget to move your mirrors. I know it is quite basic, but some people tend to switch on the engine straight away before check them. You will failure if you do not do it.

I hope I was helpful with these informations.

Looking forward to meet you soon!

Yours truly,

Murilo

Task 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

Should long-term job seekers in receipt of government benefits be made to do voluntary work so that they give something back to the community?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

Being a volunteer is beneficial for the unemployed people and to society either. It can bring meaning and purpose to their life, while increasing their self-esteem and well-being in the process to get a new job. Besides, it has a positive impact on the communities, economy, and increases social cohesion.

Volunteering is meaningful and enjoyable, and in turn good for mental health and well-being, promoting a sense of achievement and purpose. When doing something to benefit others is great to make people feel more socially connected and valuable. As a result, it relieves stress, loneliness and alleviates symptoms of depression. It also provides a healthy boost of self-confidence by giving the chance to try something new, and more likely have a positive view of your life and future goals. Furthermore, it creates an opportunity to build up net-working of business contacts through interaction with those who have inside track on local openings or unadvertised jobs.

The benefits are reflected in the national economy due the growth of community development. Once, volunteering in education, feeding the hungry, building shelter and in other projects helps people get access to the basic needs and also helps them understand what they need to do in order to develop their own economy. Apart from this, it can build up new ideas, so contribute to starting a new business which could end up improving the lives of many economically.

To summarise, volunteering contributes to economic development, and it is an important way to help individuals and communities, as well as contributes to self-development, raise well-being and promotes a sense of personal accomplishment. These are essential elements to keep a job-seeker motivated and feel useful to society all in all.

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