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[Shivraj P] Writing Practice Test 361107

Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The illustrations show two stages in the development of the mobile phone. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

Writing Task 1

The pictures illustrates the two stages of mobile phone. It shows the comparison between the early and the contempory model of the mobile phone.

Overall we can see there is a vast evolvement in various aspects and features between both the models.There is also a lot difference between their size and design.

As we can see the display of the old model is black and white whereas latest model has full-colour display.

There is not only reduction in their size but also their overall weight is also different.The traditional phone has dimension of 130 mm and 50 mm of height and width respectively and weighs upto 150 grams.On the other hand latest phone has a height of 90 mm and width of 40 mm which is much lesser than the earlier model and its weight is 70 grams, almost half.

There is also a large difference between the design and pattern of both the phones.The keyboard of earlier model is a bit simple and has less functions,whereas the latest model has more attractive and multitasking keyboard with combination of numericals and alphabets.Furthermore we can see there is a slight change in the design of earphone.

The most new feature is the camera,which only comes the latest model.Moreover the contempory model has extra functions such as e-mail with internet feature.It also has a inbuilt music player and a multi-player game facilty for entertainment.However we can see these features only in the contempory model and not in earlier model.

Task 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Some people believe that giving longer prison sentences is the best way to reduce crime. Others believe that there are better ways to reduce crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

You should write at least 250 words.

As we know according to the legal system one is sentenced for imprisonment if he or she is found guilty in any legal offence.No one can escape from the punishment after the commitment of any crime.

Most of the people hold the opinion that prison is the best punishment for the criminals which can help in reducing the crimes rates others however disagree with this and believe there are better ways to reduce them.

Some people think that the only way to reduce the crime is giving longer prison sentence.In addition They believe that no criminal should be given a soft corner for any reason,everyone should be treated equally in the court of law.They have the opinion that after a longer prison sentence,one will be aware of the crime they have commited and would not dare to do it again.

However some think exact contradictory to this.They believe that any criminal is not a born criminal,there might be some circumstances which may lead someone on a wrong path.They feel if someone deserves a second chance, the legal system can help them to improve and be a better person instead giving them long prison sentence.

According to my opinion,the court should get information about the background and reason the crime and should take legal action accordingly instead of harsh punishment of long sentence.For example if a teen is found in any legal offence,he or she should not be directly convicted for a prison sentence.There should a detailed study of the situaton,and then the action should be taken.Moreover they can be sent to rehabiltation centres instead of prison,which can make them realise about the offence they have done and can improve themselves and be a better person

Lastly I would say that one should have faith in the legal sytem and not only hope but also trust the legal authorities.

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