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[Harish M] Writing Practice Test 359657

Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The illustrations show two stages in the development of the mobile phone. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

Writing Task 1

The figures compare the development stage of handphones. The first phone represents the previous mobile phone. While the next one illustrates the modern handphone. Overall, the latter phone has some differences in feature, size, and dimension than the earlier handphone.

Based on the previous mobile phone, there are only 16 keyboard buttons. While the modern phone has more buttons than the previous phone. A lighter weight of 70 g can be found in the modern mobile phone than the earlier one with a weight of 150 g. In addition, the early handphone has a monochrome display (black and white). In contrast, the modern mobile phone has a full-color display. Besides, the contemporary handphone has a specific camera feature that able to record a video.

To conclude the information from the figures, the contemporary handphone is smaller than the previous handphone. In addition, the modern mobile phone has more features and facilities for email, internet, music player, and games.

Task 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Some people believe that giving longer prison sentences is the best way to reduce crime. Others believe that there are better ways to reduce crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

You should write at least 250 words.

Crime punishments have evolved in recent decades. People argue which method of punishment that effective to prevent crimes, whether by just extending prison sentences or by giving a combination of financial penalty and prison sentences. These punishment strategies present both pros and cons. However, in my opinion, the combination of fines and longer prison sentences is much more effective.

On one hand, extending prison sentences is the most common method to punish criminals. Many countries apply this punishment method to prisoners. Lighter crimes will be sentenced to a few years in prison. In contrast, severe crimes, such as murder and rape, will be sentenced to a half or lifetime prison. However, the method of judgment for this punishment maybe not that subjective. Furthermore, the longer the punishment, the costs for maintaining the prisoner will be higher.

On the other hand, the combination of financial penalty and longer prison may be more effective to reduce crime numbers. Firstly, the fines will influence or impact not only criminals but also the family of criminals. This will create accumulative preventive measures. The family will try their best to prevent the family member to conduct crimes. Furthermore, the fines can be used for the government income or for the maintenance of the prison's facility and the prison's employees.

To sum up the essay, the punishment method by giving an extension of prison sentences may lack subjectiveness. In contrast, a combination of fines and extension of prison will improve the preventive measures and present the income for prisons.

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