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[Eito K] Writing Practice Test 356111

Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The illustrations show two stages in the development of the mobile phone. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

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Task 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Some people believe that giving longer prison sentences is the best way to reduce crime. Others believe that there are better ways to reduce crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

You should write at least 250 words.

it is argued longer peirod prisonars stay in Jainls, more effective way it is to reduce crime. but there are another people it not best way to dimish crime rates. it is certain, prisons is where criminals are supposed to be displined and there is no freedom ordinal people have but crime would not reduce for length of offeder.

first of all, longer prison sentences take a chance to live in society same as other people from crminals. that gives damages their life. for instance, a person steals a luxary bags from a retails stores and the criminal are supposed to put in a prison for 2 years. but the period in a prison for rubbery turned into 10 years. they would hesitate to break into stores to take valuable stuffs because they put themselves at significant risk. longer period of prisons might be effective for not serious crime.

On the other hand, significant crimes such as murder, is not reduced by that change in length of term for a Jail. there some crimes well-planned or cause of the crime can not be prevented by introducing the longer period for Jails. for example, a person killed a co-worker who bullied the person in workplace, he kept put up wtih the bulling without telling anyone. but at some points, they could not hold back his angriness and killed the co-worker. in this case, there is not time to think their future risk in his mind.

In conclusioin, giving longer sentences is effecetive to diminish some crimes which is supposed to short prison sentences. However, There are some problems occured without thinking of ruining their future lives at all.

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