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[Harpreet K] Writing Practice Test 355946

Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The illustrations show two stages in the development of the mobile phone. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

Writing Task 1

The diagram depicts the information about the comparison between early mobile phone and modern mobile phone into two different stages in the development of the cell phone.

To give an overview,it is clearly evident that the contemporary mobile phone has a lot of features added along with flexibility than previous one.

To begin with,it is lucid that the display of te modern phone is full coloured,caompared with black or white display of old mobile phone.The weight of early phone is more than double rather than modern mobile phone while,the lenght or width of modern phone are smaller with 9 centimeteres and 4 centimeteres and 5 centimeters respectively.

In addition,it is crystal clear that the early phone has only keyboard and function with select button,while contemporary mobile phone has extra function such as e-mail,in order to send and receive message on the internet,it can play music and multiple player games faccility,although it can also be closed and opened.Following that In the modern phone has biggest feature is camera with video capability and weight is only 70 gram whereas the early phone has 150 grams weight,that has heavey compared to new phone.

Task 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Some people believe that giving longer prison sentences is the best way to reduce crime. Others believe that there are better ways to reduce crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

You should write at least 250 words.

Crime is a serious problem acress the globe and all countries are trying to deal with this pressing issueA section of the society believe that prison sentences for a longer time duration can help reduce the crime,whilst other disagree and argument that alternative ways suc as educting to earn are far more benefical than cinfining them to prison cell.Let us deep deleve in this essay and discuss both the points in te upcoming paragraphs.

To embark upon,many people believe that offenders shuld be punished with long prison sentences because this phenoenon can prvoke fear among other criminals.In other worlds,if a person is already aware of intensity of punishment before committing any crime,it will discourag him from becoming a criminals.For instance, in UAE,the rapist and murderer usually get life time prison sentences,resulting in making people think twice before commititng any serious crimeHence,imposing strict punisment deters people from commiting atrocities.

On the contrary,other argue that theer are more effective ways to reduce te crie rate.They insist that sparing thier life after commiting serious crimes involving one's life will be only wasting the tax that citizens paid.Hence to sentence to death will show a powerfull warning to other,which result in a stiff drop in crime rate.To cite an exmple,a survey conducted by United States Of Bereau in april 2009 ,in between age group adults in 500 students were goes wrong way of choose crime for full filled thier all desire ,50% of adults sell out drugs in thier small age for big amount of money.

In my opinion,i assert that the these people can be of service to the whole community during thier imprisonment.The labour force from these criminals will be great contribution of tte societies..It does not imply that tese violent and dangerous people will be relaesed and walk around the inner city freely.The will be under heavy supervision.For example,they will be tied to heavy chainand placed in construction sites to assists the building companies or they could be working as farmer when the harvesting season comes.

To conclude that,ther are clear grounds both for and against long imprisonment.Thus the government must protect innconnet lives from brutal and recless criminals by researching the best method out of all these arguments.

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