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[Luigi R Oliva] Writing Practice Test 270123

Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The illustrations show two stages in the development of the mobile phone. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

Writing Task 1

The images show how is changed in a number of years the features of a mobile phone. The differences between Early mobile phone and contemporary mobile phone are various, firstly, the early mobile phone was composed of one block on the contrary the new contemporary mobile phone is made by two parts one for the display and ear phone while another for keyboard and extra functions.

Furthermore, in a contemporary mobile phone, there is a full-colour display while in an early mobile phone there was black/white display.

The contemporary mobile phone has a new design and obvious has got less weight for 80g and is shorter than an early mobile phone.

It is clear that one of the main difference is the keyboard, in the past, it was composed only by number while on the contemporary mobile phone it is possible to find many new functions for instance: email, internet music player...

Finally, probably, the newest function that there wasn't on the early mobile phone is the camera with video capability.

Task 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Some people believe that giving longer prison sentences is the best way to reduce crime. Others believe that there are better ways to reduce crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

You should write at least 250 words.

Strong prison sentences have always been discussed by people all over the world, some people believe that is the way to reduce criminality, while on the contrary others thinks that is possible to find alternative ways to have less crime. I agree with the second point of view, nowadays, we have a number of examples where next longer prison sentences, the crimes continued to increase.

It's really common, that people are very boring to live in a place with many criminalities and believe that to stop this problem the only way is to give longer prison sentences. I understand totally this point of view, but as I said I disagree, the state must guarantee a new life for prisoners with the hope that they don't make their mistakes again.

In other words, long sentences for instance 30 years of prisons decrease the possibility to make a new life and generate hate from prisoners.

I'm convinced that longer prison sentences must be adopted only in a few cases, for example, terrorism crime or mafia crime.

I think that one of the best ways to reduce crimes is the prevention that must be done by parents, schools and governments.

Another advice If we want really reduce crime, governments must improve the aids for prisoners when they are out of jail.

To conclude, of course, this is not a simple topic but we must remember that if we want really reduce the crimes, the main role is played by the government that must make the right choice for the community.

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