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[Saeed I Imanloo] Writing Practice Test 218859

Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The illustrations show two stages in the development of the mobile phone. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

Writing Task 1

The picture shows two developmets in mobile phone, one eraly kind and one contemporary. Overall, there are some significant charactristicss chanded during time

As it is seen, there are some renovations between these two stages. First and foremost, the whole shape is modernized from a simple to ...one of the major change is size and weight of the device; the size in height dipped by 40 mm while the width droped just 10 mm. In addtion the contemporary device wighted 90 grams lighter than previous one. Another remarkable modernition was in display, reforming to a fully colour screen from black and white,

additinal features were also done to the mobile phone. A new camera capable of video making and aslo extra funcions in the funcion button were added like e-mail, internet, music or game playing.

In summary, several physical and hardware changes and new software development were included to the contemporary moile phone comparing to the early version, like lighetening the weight and decreasing size with new camera and multi media ability.

Task 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Some people believe that giving longer prison sentences is the best way to reduce crime. Others believe that there are better ways to reduce crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

You should write at least 250 words.

Decreasing criminals in society is of central importance. This vitalness requires rigirous approaches to prevent and aslo deter crimes. Some believe that long term jail for criminals reduce the crime, while others suggest that there are more appropriate ways. I personally agree with the latter idea,

Firstly, The main problem is not the person who commits crimes, Regarding, the social theory suggesting that in each crime the society is just as in blame as the criminal, if not more, a long imprisoning would not work out socially. The fact is that in a crime perpetuation, other aspects involving in the context keep being unchanged and even uncovered, For example in a murdur done by a man because of some bias in a trbl or family quarrell, is the longer sentence in prison for the guy solve the whole issue and decrease the crimes between them totally ?

Furthermore, the policy of long prisioning costs more than benefits. This approach could not be a deteriaration. In fact, a culture with a possibility of long jail for everyboday shows a possbility of crime first before guarenteeing security for their people. Besides, the cost of prisons put an enormous strains on gevernments too, providing their necessities including more military cost, more, accomodation and so on.

To conclude, long jais is not a good option to prevent crime in soceity. First of all, to deal with crimes appropriately, its better to look at the issue in deepr level not by extending the lenght of sentences. Also, the cost of this policy is so much , signifying there is possibility of criminal and huge tangible expense for administrations.

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