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[Vansheed S] Writing Practice Test 217841

Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The illustrations show two stages in the development of the mobile phone. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

Writing Task 1

The illustration illustrates two different mobile phones and there development changes of the phone.

Overall, the early mobile phone have basic features such as the ear phone, the black and white display and the function select button. Moreover, the new edition has kept the ear phone compartment. Furthermore, the contempory mobile phone consists of various new features such as the extra function and the addition of the camera.

In addition, the measurements of the early mobile phone is 130mm by 50mm and the weight of the mobile phone 150g. However, the measurements of the contempory mobile phone is 90mm by 40mm. and it weigh 70g. The new phone weight less as compared to the old edition.

Furthermore, several features are included in the new edition of the mobile phone.The first feature is that the keyboard in old edition is kept while in the new edition, it is replaced with extra functions. The extra function includes new features such as email, internet music player, multi-player game and facility. The second feature is full colour diplay on the screen.

Task 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Some people believe that giving longer prison sentences is the best way to reduce crime. Others believe that there are better ways to reduce crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

You should write at least 250 words.

Individuals belive that to reduce the crime rates, longer prison sentence is allocated while others contradicts this statement. I disagree with this statement and think that there are several ways to reduce crime rates.

Firstly, rather than allocating the prisoner with a longer sentence in jail, the judge have the option to put the accused in house areest. House arrest is an effective way to punish an individual. These laws are establised the police department and the accused must obey the rules and regulations. The rules includes no social gatherings and family events. In addition, the accused must stay at home and they will be monitored on a daily basis. Hence, this is an effective way to reduce crime rates in the city.

Secondly, another method to reduce crime rates is the addion of security in remote and dangerous areas. The police department must allocate new officers in these regions to monitor and observe any unusual behavior. This is a good tatic as the police officers will identify and catch the criminal. For example, In Canada, the police departement decided to allocate several units at night to monitor and ispect any criminal activities. This is a smart method established by the police department as the crimes rates has reduced. This is a good strategy as the police department will be able to control the crime ratess.

To conclude, providing longer prison sentences to reduce crime rates is not a proper method to solve this issue. Thee above methods must are effective to eliminate to the criminal activities.

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