[yoon h lwin] Writing Practice Test 1015477

The given chart illustrates the information about the total number of Olympic medals won by twelve different countries. Overall, it can be noticed that the America and the UK are the only countries which won large amount of gold, silver and bronze medal as compared to others.It is crystal clear that China , Japan and east Germany won average number of Olympic medals, which seems quite less according to the proportion of Italy, Sweden and Australia and that is approximately, between 1 to 500 respectively.Moreover, france and Gernamy have won same amount of all the medal types such as bronze, silver and gold. While, the winning proportion of medals in the UK is crossing the border line of 500 and soviet union have won around 1,000 awards of Olympic. Meanwhille, the USA is the only country found which have more percentage of gold awards than rest of the given countries. Sweden is the only country measured in the given picture which have won decent amount of medals.

There are people who believe that homework should not be given to children because it's not effective and cause unneccessary stress, On the other hand, some argue that homework may give children some benefits, like intelligence growth and improvement in soft skills. This essay will discuss both point of views and explain why homework plays an important role in the education of children.

Homework give incentive for children to review their lessons in their house. Hence, children who had more homeworks are generally more prepared to handle exams. Learning process does not stop at school, therefore it was suggested that parents help their children at home too.There are people who argue that giving more homeworks would reduce children's playtime which would affect their social skills. Private school give a creative and effective solution in order to tackle this problem, Recently, there are homeworks where students need to work together in groups in order to finish the tasks properly. Furthermore, they are also encouraged to socialize with their friends by their teachers by playing some educational video games. These video games are filled with recent knowledge and would actively engage the students.

In conclusion, despite the reduced time of socializing that giving more homeworks would give, school can provide homeworks where thay have to work in groups to finish it. Thus, the advantages of homework outweigh its disadvantages.